请问email格式有没有错误.指点一下.谢谢 Dear Mike, How's everthin

请问email格式有没有错误.指点一下.谢谢 Dear Mike, How's everthin
请问email格式有没有错误.指点一下.谢谢
Dear Mike,
How's everthing? I have already collected your letter yesterday. You told me you will come to my city and you wanted to live in my home. I want to say welcome to my home. I think I will meet you in the airport. But if we cross, that's terrible. So I tell you my home's adress. I live in No. 12 Xinhua Street.
Now, I introduce my home and my family. My home is not too big, but it's clean and tidy. That's my mother's contribution. My parents are CEO in two different company. They are so busy everyday. So they have to get up on 6:00 a.m every workday. In the weekend, sometimes they must work overtime. I'm a student, I also get up on 6:00 every morning. Because I must go to school to study. I study in Sichuan University. I usually have lunch in the university, if you want to have lunch with me, you can come to my school. I have dinner with my parents.
By the way, you must phone to me when you arrive here. My phone number is 78524903.
Best Wishes.
Yours
Liming