修改下面的作文x and ymy name is y.x is my cousin .she is my best fr

修改下面的作文
x and y
my name is y.x is my cousin .she is my best friend .too .she is 40 days older than i .we both in grade 8.but are in diffent schools we both have a midium height and we are both good students at school .we both have a midium height and a midium build .i am more outgoing she ia quite than me she studies very hard but i am lazier i should learn from she as for we are both weak in it ao we are unhealthy how ever we both try to eat less junk food to be healthgy x is very funny always makes me laugh for this reason i like to play with her ithink iam lunkily to have a friend like her
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田宝贝 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

reg68 幼苗

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看你里面都是句号我就不改符号了
第二行we和both之间加are,but后的are可去掉
第三行把midium改为medium,还是别用网上的不严格英语单词
第四行中she前加while,quite改为quiter,这要用比较级
第五行把but改为while,lazier改为lazy就可以了,she改为her,as后的for去掉,as前要加句号
第六行it ao 这里看不明白你的意思,可能你打错了吧,however前加逗号
第七行healthgy 改为healthy,always前加she ,for前加逗号
第八行lunkily改为lucky

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