英语作文找错麻烦看下我写错了不I love sunglasses ,beacuse I think I lool coo

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麻烦看下我写错了不
I love sunglasses ,beacuse I think I lool cool with sunglasses.I like the watch ,beacuse it can tell me the time,I can't stand the scarf ,beacuse it is for girls.I don't like the key ring,beacuse it's a little heavy for me .And the coolst thing was the belt.Everyone loves it!
jackie9527 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

简单沙儿 幼苗

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这是你自己写的吗?这样写有点罗嗦哟.句型都是一样的.
I lool cool ----I look cool
coolst thing ----coolest thing
我觉得你可以这样写:
I like sunglasses and watch ,because the sunglasses can make me cool ,the watch can tell me the time .I don't like key ring,it's a little bit heavy for me ,and the scarf is a terrible thing for me ,I think girls like it .The coolest thing is belt ,I think everyone may like it !

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ahliulin 幼苗

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i love sunglasses, because i think i will look cool with sunglasses on. i like watches, because they can tell me the time, i can't stand scarves, because they are for girls. i dont like key rings, bec...

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