英语短文帮我查看一下下面短文是否有错误,找出一处5分,以此类推,My FamilyHello!My name is #

英语短文
帮我查看一下下面短文是否有错误,找出一处5分,以此类推,
My Family
Hello!My name is # # #.I'm thirteen years old.I'm a student.I like reading books and watching TV.I want to be a teacher.I'm good at Maths and Art.
My father is thirty-seven years old.He likes watching TV,too.We often watch TV together after lunch.And he likes playing football.
My mother is thirty-six.She is a housewife.She isn't very tall.She has two small eyes and a small mouth.She likes cooking and growing flowers.She often cooks nice food.On Sundays,we often go shopping and go swimming.She swims better than me .But I swim faster than her.
My grandmother is sixty years old.She likes rading newspapers .She often reads newspapers .And she likes watering the flowers.She waters flowers every day.There are many beautiful flowers in my house.Sometimes,there are some butterflies in my house.It's very nice.I like them very much.
My grandfather is sixty-two years old,but he looks very young.His hair is very short.He likes cooking,too.He cooks better than my mother.And he likes making kites.He often makes nice kites for me.
I have a happy family.
我是景轩 1年前 已收到5个回答 举报

拉古菲儿 花朵

共回答了12个问题采纳率:83.3% 举报

基本没什么错误.
如果你是初中生,我觉得你写的还不错了,文句通顺,语法没毛病,拼写错误也不多.
如果你是高中生的话,这样的作文就有点太平庸了,没什么出彩的地方,能得 80%,但是 肯定得不到 90%.

1年前

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nhsyli 幼苗

共回答了21个问题采纳率:85.7% 举报

rading newspapers - reading (拼写错误吧)

1年前

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5181188 幼苗

共回答了40个问题 举报

She likes rading newspapers -----reading

1年前

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我心豪迈 幼苗

共回答了29个问题 举报

奶奶那段,把It's very nice改成They are very nice比较好。

1年前

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公平NO1 幼苗

共回答了28个问题 举报

除了楼上说的拼写错误,基本没什么语法错误,因为文中涉及的语法很少。基本就是第三人称单数。
但是就文章来讲,如果写我的家庭,最好一开始就说我家有多少人,都有谁,然后再逐一阐述,我是看到最后才发现你写的是你的家庭的。
仅供参考。我的题目就是my family看到了,但是从结构上来讲,用中文写还讲究个总分总呢。...

1年前

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