我要一篇英语作文,主要是可怕的经历,少点!急!

①a horrible experience
i used to be fond of skating.but now things have changed because of a horrible experience.
one winter,the weather was so cold that water turned into ice.one day on my way home,when seeing a frozen lake,i thought that the ice must be thick enough to support me.being so interested in skating,i couldn't help going down and sliding on the ice.suddenly,i heard a sound of crack.looking down,i saw the crack on the ice surface.i was frightened out of my life and didn't dare to move.but nobody could help me.i had to move toward the bank carefully.
as soon as i got onto the bank,the ice broke.how horrible it was!even ifit has been a long time since then,i can still feel the fear.and i no longer like skating since then.
一次可怕的经历
我曾经非常喜欢滑冰.但是因为一次可怕的经历,事情发生了改变.
一年冬天,天气—卜分寒冷,湖水都结了冰.一天在回家的路上,看到结冰的湖面,我想这冰厚得足以支撑得住我.因为喜欢滑冰,我忍不住跑到湖面上滑起来.突然我听到一丝开裂声,向下一看,我看到冰面上出现了裂纹.我被吓得要命,不敢动.但是没有人能帮助我,我只能小心翼翼地向岸边挪动.
我刚一上岸,冰面就裂开了.太可怕了!即使过去了这么长时间,我仍然感到恐惧.从那时起我就不再喜欢滑冰了.
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一次可怕的经历(An frightening experience)
today i would like to tell you some terrible experience when i was 5,maybe someone of you would like to say that everything was terrible for me when i was 5.
今天我要告诉大家在5岁时经历的意见很可怕的事情.不会有人说5岁时经历的任何事情都是可怕的呀（这里是美国式的幽默,楼主不喜欢也可不要）.
and the star of my stroy is a snake.most of you should be afride of it,right?it was the summer of my age five,i had the holiday with my cousin who was 3 years older than me in the downtown.you know ,there was beatiful.trees,flowers,rivers,montains and snakes.
这个故事的主角是一条蛇,你们都很害怕的吧,那时在我5岁那年的夏天,我和大我3岁的表哥去乡下玩.你知道吗,乡下有多漂亮,绿荫,鲜花,河流,山峰,当然,还有蛇.
when we saw it we really did not get ready.it was there completely motionless before i stept on it.it vellicated suddenly and i was stunned when it opened its mounth and sticking its tongue.i screamed and ran away as quickly as possible.it was aslo the only time that i run faster than my cousin.
我们对于它的出现完全没有准备,在我踩到它之前它几乎是纹丝不动的在那里,当它突然扭动起阿里,还张开了嘴巴吐着红红的信子,我怔住了,然后以最快的速度尖叫着跑开了.这也是唯一一次我跑的比我表哥快.