This week is special,because this Saturday was lunar New Yea
This week is special,because this Saturday was lunar New Year!求检查语法错误!
This week is special,because this Saturday was lunar New Year!Although I didn’t ate dumpling or set off firework but I was really very happy.Beside this is my first time celebrate Spring Festival without myself,a little upside but it’s ok.I like ChunWan very much and I thought it was the best one I have seen.
This week is special,because this Saturday was lunar New Year!Although I didn’t ate dumpling or set off firework but I was really very happy.Beside this is my first time celebrate Spring Festival without myself,a little upside but it’s ok.I like ChunWan very much and I thought it was the best one I have seen.
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1.because在句中 special后面不加逗号 只有在because在句首时 才加
2. didn't 已经是过去是 后面动词eat写原型 不能写过去式ate
3. dumpling和firework后都要要加s
4. 用了although 就不用用but了 两者任选其一 删掉一个
5. Beside做“除此之外”来讲时 用“besides”更好 后面要加逗号 因为后面跟的是整句话
6. celebrate 应该用现在分词形式 celebrating
7. without改为by myself后改为句号
8. 后面一句 a little 前面加上It is. 然后upside改成upset. ChunWan要加引号 然后前面加the或者this year‘s
9.thought改为think, was 改为is 更好一点 因为你现在还是这么认为的 并是不只是以前这么认为
2. didn't 已经是过去是 后面动词eat写原型 不能写过去式ate
3. dumpling和firework后都要要加s
4. 用了although 就不用用but了 两者任选其一 删掉一个
5. Beside做“除此之外”来讲时 用“besides”更好 后面要加逗号 因为后面跟的是整句话
6. celebrate 应该用现在分词形式 celebrating
7. without改为by myself后改为句号
8. 后面一句 a little 前面加上It is. 然后upside改成upset. ChunWan要加引号 然后前面加the或者this year‘s
9.thought改为think, was 改为is 更好一点 因为你现在还是这么认为的 并是不只是以前这么认为
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