求修改英语Many people want their new ideas and wishes come true.T

1.”come true“改为“to come true”
2."Make many beautiful...passage of time"改为“I want to make many beautiful...passage of time"【或者你自己把want to 改为别的词,避免重复.（你这句话没有主语,要么加主语,要么改成前一句话的状语】
3.”couldn't"后面得加动词
4.“in the memory so much scenery”改成“in the memory with so much scenery”
5.“and sighed with emotion at the same time the fast passage of time.”这句话看不懂你的句子成分,sighed 改为 sigh.你这句话是想说“在时间的飞速流逝中带着情感叹息”吗
初中水平请谅解

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