这几句话英语要怎么写列?请问下各位英语棒的哥哥姐姐们,我想把几句话写成英语,那么英语要怎么写列?我想写的话是； 离开你我

leaving you I looked like in the another heaven,Now in my eyes everything wasn't so beautiful.But after then I slowly to begin that I discovered ,you weren't in my line of my sight,my eyes also could smil so beautiful.
离开你以后我好像进了另一个天堂,现在在我的眼睛里任何东西都不那么美了,
但是之后我开始慢慢发现,你已不在我的视线里了,我的眼睛也可以笑得如此美丽.
这段英语大概就是我上边翻译的了,上楼答的也不错,就是有一些句子太长,句子应该是过去式

Left your me on likely to arrive as if another heaven, all no longer are at present that America.But afterwards I started to discover slowly that, originally you in mine line of sight, my eye also might not smile so beautifully

After leaving you , I seemed to be in another heaven. Everything was no lnger that beautiful .But after then I found slowly I could also smile so beautiful when you were not in my line of sight .
主句I found ---
宾语从句I could also smile so beautiful
时间状语从句when you were not in my line of sight

After leaving you I found everything seems to be no longer so beautiful which like to be fallen to another heaven.Yet then I slowly discovered that even though you are not in my line of sight, my eyes...