烛龙之子
幼苗
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taking bus is a environmental way, which saves energy and reduces pollution.
my research was mainly focused on the bus routes nearby dongyuan district(这个地方,district是一种行政区划,如果表达的是住宅小区建议用garden), to evaluate the rationality of the bus routes, and to propose the solution to the unrational part and, also, some knowledge on public transportation.
the map is for the bus routes mentioned above(避免重复用语), and we can learn some information, such as the characteristics of the bus routes, according to the buildings on the map and the pictures that I have took during my research.
In order to match the concept of “Green Travel”, (the background color I chose) is green.
括号中是一个整体,作为主语,后面系动词+宾语
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