请帮我看看下面这段英文句子我写的对吗? 中文内容是:“张先生告诉我他7月14日想去德国,想办理商务签证,请发一个商务邀请函给我们“ Mr Zhang told me that he will go to Germany at 14 July ,he want deal with business visa,could pls send us a Business Letters of Invitation,thanks.
这是正确的哦:Mr.Zhang told me that he wants to go to Germany on July 14th,want to apply for business visa,please send an invitation to our business thanks 你可以对照一下看看!