英文改错Dear allToday is last day that I work with all of you.Th

Dear all
Today is the last day I work here with all of you.Thanks for the training and help that all managers and colleagues have given during my working in the group.
As you know my English is poor...So,please forgive my saying goodbye with such a few words.I am looking forward to meeting everyone as friend.Thank you!
Best wishes
（最后一句meet,我不知道你表达的什么意思,不过形式我给改对了,应该是ving形式 .还有朋友的确是用单数

Today is (the) last day that I work with all of you. Thanks for all the manager(s) and colleague(s) (that) always train and help me during (my) work at Group.
As you know my English is…... So, p...

Dear all (去掉all吧)

Today is （注意这里的last day 是特指，加个the）last day that I work with all of you. Thanks for (thanks for 后跟感谢的事儿) all the manager (孩纸呀，怎么可以不注意单复数呢，加个 S )and colleague（s） what (改成who吧...