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整篇文章还是很不错的,只是有个别地方写得不太清楚.如:
1. I will olng a little english. 是不是想说:I can speak a little English. 或是Ihave learnt a little English?
2. my interest is the movie and tourism. 最好说成 I am interested in watching movies and I like travelling very much.
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