下面英文自我介绍 hello everyone.first let me introduce myself.my nam

下面英文自我介绍
hello everyone.first let me introduce myself.my name is i will olng a little english
my interest is the movie and tourism
i like the movie the twilght series
its nice tobe here
i hope we get along very well
thank you
心意-玮 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

feisquare 幼苗

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整篇文章还是很不错的,只是有个别地方写得不太清楚.如:
1. I will olng a little english. 是不是想说:I can speak a little English. 或是Ihave learnt a little English?
2. my interest is the movie and tourism. 最好说成 I am interested in watching movies and I like travelling very much.

1年前

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吃饱撑的7upny1 幼苗

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除了楼上讲的那些,还应该把its nice to be here放到前面第二句

1年前

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