短文改错It was cloudy ,but we don't think it would rain.So our f

1.don't think --didn't think (文章是叙述过去发生的事,故用过去式)
2.在countryside前加 the:the countryside 农村/乡村
3.what we brought --that we brought或去掉what (what 不能做定从的关系代词,要用that)
4.while it began to rain中:while --when(while 只能同延续性动词连用;而when同延续性动词或非延续性动词连用,begin 为非延续性动词.因此用when)
5.a big tree nearly 中:nearly(将近)--nearby (附近的,作后置定语)
6.Unfortunate--Unfortunately 应用副词作状语
7.more heavier--much heavier(much+比较级,"...得多)
8.their car-- our car.(我们跑回"我们的"车)
9.on the car--in the car(在车里吃午餐)
10.funs--fun(fun为不可名)
注:We were very hungry at at that time.此句中多了一个at,可能是打字时多打了一个.

It was cloudy , but we don't(didn't) think it would rain. So our family drove to (加上the)countryside for a picnic as planning(planned). We parked near a river at noon, and then put all the food what(th...

1,don't--didn't
2planning--planned
3what we brought中的what改成that
4while--when
5nearly--nearby
6Unfortunate--Unfortunately
7more heavier--much heavier
8their---our
9on the car--in the car
10funs---fun

don't----didn't
our---my
countryside前面加the
planning---planned
what we brought中的what去掉，或改成that
while---when
nearly---nearby
Unfortunate---Unfortunately
more heavier----e...