请帮我看看这篇英语文章有什么语法错误,

请帮我看看这篇英语文章有什么语法错误,
Love animals
Hello,ladies and gentlemen.My name is Joey.Today my topic is:love animals.
Animals are part of early.It’s an important part.But people are not love animals.People usually hurt animals.For example,some people shots birds.Some people took bird’s egg.That is so barbarity I think.We should love animals.Mad cow disease and bird flu just is animal’s revolt.
Now in England we have SPCA to take for animals.Take care of animals is important,love animals are important.Let’s love animals please!Thank you very much!
答得好的话,
langziii 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

最爱精灵 幼苗

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But people are not love animals
是But people don't love animals
some people shots birds
是 some people shot birds
Some people took bird’s egg
是Some people took birds’ eggs
Take care of animals is important,love animals are important.
是taking,loving
还有我觉得是loving animals

1年前

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yds3000 幼苗

共回答了4个问题 举报

动名词做主语,使用V.ING形式.
love animals.是loveing animals.
Take care of animals.是taking care of animals.
But people are not love animals.People usually hurt animals.我觉得你可以这样写:But people are cruel to animals.They don't love animals.

1年前

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