请老师批改2I am writing to express my interest in your recently a

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I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waiter working at evening.Enclosed this letter is my resume,which further details my qualification and previous work experience.
I believe that I am the right person for the position.To begin with,I have experience working in a restaurant as a waiter.Furthermore,I have a good command of English communication which may bring convenience to your restaurant as there are many foreign people having dinner here.Finally,my warmth and friendliness could make consumers feel at home.
I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience,to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant.Thank you for your consideration of my application.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming