请帮我修正一下,First,I like the scenery of small town.The scenery o

the scenery of (the) small town
(The scenery of small town )重复 (at) every season is very beautiful.
最好是It is very beautiful in every season.
work hardly work hard
young plants grown from seeds 好像没这么说的
如果说种子发芽应该是plants peek out of the seed
enjoy a feel 有一种感觉的意思吗 那应该是 have a feeling 享受这种感觉的意思吗 那应该是 enjoy the feeling
fluttered 可能拼错了吧
the defoliation that fluttered in the breeze.如果是落叶在秋风中掉落的话应该是 the defoliations fall in the autimn wind(秋天了用breeze似乎不太合适吧)
In winter the land is covered by snow;(and) children (usually) have a snowball fight.
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First, I like the scenery of the small town. The scenery of the town is very beautiful at each season . In the spring the farmers work hardly and young plants grown from seeds. In the summer I can ...

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