初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（3）

写的不错...按照你的思路给你更改如下
This is Monday,a very busy day.
Not only pages of forms need to be finished,but also a lot of questions are waiting to be ansered from my customers (这个是客户你确定?如果是想说老师的话 用 master`s).
No one can help me,because everyone is busy as well.
Thanks god (这个非常口语 不能用于书面语 你非要用吗?推荐说法如下)
I felt so tired when the whole works were finished.
I just want to go home now,lying on my bed is my whole wish.

answer
because everyone is busy too
写的不错 用了从句，还有很多固定搭配 坚持 每日一文

such a busy day（感觉这个说起来跟舒服，呵呵，仅供参考呀）
answer
helps
everyone is busy
thank god
comes
go home