求一篇英语短文改错一篇英语改错It was about eight in the evening.It was rain

It was about eight in the evening.It was raining heavy(改heavily） so I had to stay at home.I was reading the（改为an） interesting novel in my room.Suddenly,the bell rang.I immediately rose to my foot（改为feet） to answer it.To my surprise,it was a stranger,who stood there,looked（改为looking） a little of（去掉of） shy."Is there anything I can do for you,sir?" I asked."Um,I'm sorry for interrupting,and（该为but） I am dying about （改为for）something to drink." "Wait a minute." I said,but when I returned(加wiht） a glass of water,the man is（改为was） nowhere to be found.How（改为what） a stranger man he was!
注：1.在阅读英文原著时常会遇到stay home和stay at home这两个不同的表达方式,都是可以的.
在go home,arrive home,get home这些短语中,home是副词,表示方向或目的地,而不表示位置.但在美国英语中,人们有时使用home来表示位置（在家）.而在英国英语中,人们是用at home来表达这层意思的.所以我们常常会遇到home和at home的情况.
2.rise to one's feet站起
3.）...be dying for sth（口语）渴望……,be dying to do sht

It was about eight in the evening. It was raining heavy (heavy -> heavily) so (加 that) I had to stay at (去掉at) home. I was reading the (the ->an) interesting novel in my room. Suddenly, the bell rang....

你好歹用 / 断一下行啊，这样怎么改啊

heavy-heavily the-an foot-feet looked-looking of- about-for returned^a -with is-was how-what he-it

和楼上不太一样
It was about eight in the evening. It was raining heavy(heavy -> heavily) so I had to stay at home. I was reading the(the->an
) interesting novel in my room. Suddenly, the bell rang. ...