找这篇文章的语病、单词拼写不正确和语句不通顺.

找这篇文章的语病、单词拼写不正确和语句不通顺.
My Uncle's Day
My uncle is a doctor. He gets up at 6:30. It's early. Then he eats his breakfast. He goes to work at 8:00. When he gets the hospital, he begins his work. At around 6:00 p.m. he gets home. Then he eats supper, watches TV and has a shower. At 10:00 o'clock, he goes to bed.
april0922 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

鱼在网上漂 花朵

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全篇就一个地方可斟酌一下的.
倒数第2句, has a shower 用 takes a shower 替代更好, 更符合语言习惯~

1年前

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馨梓的乡愁 幼苗

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breakfast->breakfirst
When he gets the hospital, he begins his work这一句最好变成:He begins his work when he gets the hospital.

1年前

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