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My mother died months 【 before--ago 】 and my father was often out on 【去掉the 】business,so I felt very lonely.I missed my old life 【then--when】 my mother was still alive and we were happy.Laura was my best 【friends--friend】and cared about me very much.One Friday when I thought I 【will--would】 have to spend the weekend alone,I couldn’t help 【cry--crying】.She sat with me,not saying【something--anything】while I 【cried--was crying】 until I felt 【calmly--calm】.From that day on,she often encouraged me 【加上to】face my life bravely.Gradually,I began to consider the reality calmly.【Under--With】her help,I was able to deal with my feelings better.
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