To achieve our goals,we must change our habits.As 18-year-ol

To achieve our goals,we must change our habits.As 18-year-old boy
To achieve our goals,we must change our habits.As 18-year-old boy,after signing for the city football team,I quickly realize that my lifestyle wasn't very good.That wouldn't help me achieve mine goal of becoming the best football players.My diet at that time was included a lot of chocolate and fatty foods.What's worse,I used to staying up late watching movies.At last,at the help of my parents I gave up eating those foods.Also,I started to go to bed or get up early.That I did soon paid off.I was chosen to play in an importantly national game.
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To achieve our goals,we must change our habits.As (加上an)18-year-old boy,after signing for the city football team,I quickly realize (改为realized)that my lifestyle wasn't very good.That wouldn't help me achieve mine(改为my) goal of becoming the best football players(改为player).My diet at that time was included(改为including) a lot of chocolate and fatty foods.What's worse,I used to staying(改为stay) up late watching movies.At last,at (改为with)the help of my parents I gave up eating those foods.Also,I started to go to bed or(改为and) get up early.That(改为What) I did soon paid off.I was chosen to play in an importantly(改为important) national game

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回家木子 幼苗

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To achieve our goals,we must change our habits.As an 18-year-old boy,after signing for the city football team,I quickly realized that my lifestyle wasn't very good....

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l_d_1234 幼苗

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I was chosen to play in an importantly national game.这个句子有问题 。应把冠词an去掉

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