这段英文的语法语序是否正确?该怎样写比较好?
这段英文的语法语序是否正确?该怎样写比较好?
All purchases are processed with full extensive care to meet our customers’ needs.Once we receive your order,it will go through our quality control procedure at our warehouse,so you receive the best in quality items.
Making a purchase with us is easy.Simply follow the below instructions to successfully complete your order:
1.Shop by browsing through our products by brand,category.
2.Click on the product image to access the individual item's product page where you willview the full product description including size details.
3.Add your selection to your shopping cart by clicking on the 'inquiry' button and close current page.
4.To continue shopping,please repeat the above instructions again.To delete an item from your shopping cart,click on the button '√'.When finishing selection,please click on the button 'Submit'.Then provide your personal information,shipping information etc.
5.Once you have completed the order stage,you will receive an acknowledgement email very soon.This will include the total of your order,payment information.
All purchases are processed with full extensive care to meet our customers’ needs.Once we receive your order,it will go through our quality control procedure at our warehouse,so you receive the best in quality items.
Making a purchase with us is easy.Simply follow the below instructions to successfully complete your order:
1.Shop by browsing through our products by brand,category.
2.Click on the product image to access the individual item's product page where you willview the full product description including size details.
3.Add your selection to your shopping cart by clicking on the 'inquiry' button and close current page.
4.To continue shopping,please repeat the above instructions again.To delete an item from your shopping cart,click on the button '√'.When finishing selection,please click on the button 'Submit'.Then provide your personal information,shipping information etc.
5.Once you have completed the order stage,you will receive an acknowledgement email very soon.This will include the total of your order,payment information.
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我英语一般.国外高三水平.顶多改改文法.括号里为可加可不加的.根据你的实际情景.
"Once we receive your order,it will go through our quality control procedure at our warehouse,so you receive the best in quality items."
-->"Once your orders are received,they go (directly) through our quality control procedure at our warehouse to make sure that you can receive your orders in best quality."
"Making a purchase with us is easy.Simply follow the below instructions to successfully complete your order"
-->"Making purchases with us is easy.Simply follow the instructions below which will perfectly complete your orders."
"1.Shop by browsing through our products by brand,category."
-->"1.browse through our products by brand or category and choose your favor."
"2.Click on the product image to access the individual item's product page where you willview the full product description including size details."
-->"1.Click on the image of the product to go to a new page where all the details and product descriptions are posted."
4...没什么特别的.最好把"the button 'xxx'"改成"'xxx' button".
"This will include the total of your order,payment information"
-->"This will include all the information of your ordering total and payment details"
"Once we receive your order,it will go through our quality control procedure at our warehouse,so you receive the best in quality items."
-->"Once your orders are received,they go (directly) through our quality control procedure at our warehouse to make sure that you can receive your orders in best quality."
"Making a purchase with us is easy.Simply follow the below instructions to successfully complete your order"
-->"Making purchases with us is easy.Simply follow the instructions below which will perfectly complete your orders."
"1.Shop by browsing through our products by brand,category."
-->"1.browse through our products by brand or category and choose your favor."
"2.Click on the product image to access the individual item's product page where you willview the full product description including size details."
-->"1.Click on the image of the product to go to a new page where all the details and product descriptions are posted."
4...没什么特别的.最好把"the button 'xxx'"改成"'xxx' button".
"This will include the total of your order,payment information"
-->"This will include all the information of your ordering total and payment details"
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求帮看一下这几句英文语法是否正确,可追分,求速度权威,错误帮改
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你能帮帮他们吗