英语短文改错Dear Mr Smith,I'm very much glad to hear that your int

Dear Mr Smith,
I'm very much(去掉much) glad to hear that your intemational shopping center will build (加上a)non-smoking supermarket,In my opinion,it is a good idea to do so ,for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less,and(改为but) it can also do good to other customers' health
.Since you had(改为have) given up selling cigarettes,the customers(加上who) don't like smoking are sure to support you,In addition,smoke(改为smoking) in the shopping center may cause fire,which is very dangerous to both your possession(改为possessions) and supermarket will not effect (改为affect)your business,To(改为On) the cantrary,it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health(改为healthy).
Best Wishes!

Dear Mr Smith,
I'm very （去掉much）glad to hear that your intemational shopping center will build（a） non-smoking supermarket,In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so , for it can not only help the ...

Dear Mr Smith, I'm very much glad to hear that your intemational shopping center will build a non-smoking supermarket,In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so , for it can not only help the smokers (...

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