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my favorite parts of the day when I was a child was when I would swin out to the raft
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如果你的句子已经结束的话,那么你的parts应该是part,应为只讲到这一件事.
应该在 child 后面加个逗号
你的swin应该是swim吧?
正确的句子应该是:
my favorite parts of the day when I was a child,was when I would swim out to the raft

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