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I enjoy walking,which is good exercise and (get改成gets) me out of the city.That is (how改成because) l have a dog.She needs to go out,(but改成so) l have a reason to go for a walk.I go every Sunday and (she改成it) does not matter to me whether it is cold,windy or sunny.I always leave home at the same time (去掉on) every Sunday and (walked改成walk) over the hill to a little village in the country.The walk is not very long,but it is quite (hardly改成hard) work because I have to walk up the hill and down the other (sides改成side).When I get to the village,I go to the pub there for a beer and (any改成some) food.After lunch,I walk back along (加入a) different path and arrive home in time for tea.
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