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Music Gave Us a Lot
Do you think
sometimes music can change a person? Music is not just a kind of voice, I
believe it had a lot of influence on human-being. You can use music to relax
yourself, you can use music to represent yourself, and even you can use music
to change yourself. Music was in our life and it gave us a lot.
Music can
change your mood. I think many people like to play some music in their space
time and you can feel your mood will be changed by music. When you were sad,
you can play a cheerful music and said your sadness to it, you would get rid of
the dark cloud of distress. When you were complacent, quite music would tell
you don’t lose yourselves. When you had a huge challenge, pop music would make
you feel more ambitious. You can share your feeling with your “music friend”,
and it will help you have a right mood.
Music is a
kind of colorful language, you don’t need to learn it but you can enjoy it. You
can feel emotion of composer in the music, whoever you are, you will enjoy the
special feeling in the music. You can feel Kenny G’s Homesickness in going
home, you can feel Ludwig van Beethoven’s firm in Fate Symphony, and you
can feel Robert Schumann’s happiness in the happy farmer. Music was colorful
and varied in postures and it can make everyone understand the feeling and
enjoy the emotion. Hector Louis Berlioz said, “Music is the soul burst.
It's not like chemical that can be carried out experimental analysis. For great
music, it is only one real property, which is emotional.” Each song was a story and it was more
appealing than a story, listening songs is a kind of enjoyment.
Music is an educational
thing. Most music can always make us be motivated. Some music can told you the
sense of being a person, some music told you should be firm, and some music
told you not to be afraid of anything. I have talked with a primary school
teacher and he said music could make student pay attention more and music told
him what is right and what is wrong, it was easier to be accepted and remembered
than talking. Music will tell you the right way to achieve your goal even told
you the thing that was more important,Ludwig van Beethoven said,
“Music is the enlightenment higher than any wisdom and philosophy，the one who can penetrate the meaning of the music is able to
get free from affliction which common people can't get rid of.” Actually music not
only can tell you some sense, but also music have more educational
value that enough to change a person.
Music gave us
a lot, actually we cannot live without it. Music can change our mood and make
us do the right choice. You can enjoy music and it is a good way to relax. Music
can teach people to be more perfect. Music gave us a lot, it had a huge influence
on us.