一篇概括课文的 短文,明天要交了,麻烦高手纠错（把语法之类的错误改正确）.纠得越多我奖励越多.

一篇概括课文的 短文,明天要交了,麻烦高手纠错（把语法之类的错误改正确）.纠得越多我奖励越多.
summary
This essay tell us a story:a young soldier was received a letter before he went to fight in the war.That letter was from a woman that he had never seen before.During the war,he got strength from this woman,with the time went by,the soldier and the woman believed they love each other.So when the solider back from the battleground,they decided to meet each other.But the woman tested the soldier by begging a middle aged woman to meet the soldier ,made the soldier though the woman in his heart was that middle aged woman.But the soldier pass the text-----he still fell thankful to the woman——no matter how the woman looked like.Later,the middle aged woman told this soldier the truth……
Structure of the eassy
part 1(Para.1):the time before the soldier meet the woman.Come straight to the topic,write the circumstance in order to attract reader.
part 2(Para.2-4):the memory of the man and the woman during the war,tell us how did this couple fallen in love.
part 3(Para.5-14):the soldier meet the middle aged woman and still felt thankful.He pass the text .And the soldier saw the truth.