英语改错 这是一篇关于我自己的英语作文,我想有许多语法错误,或有一些表达不是通顺的句子,I'm a smallbird.

I am a bird,to be exactly,I'm just an ostrich that has dreamed of flying above the mountains freely since childhood.
I was born in a remote and peaceful mountain,my childhood was lonely because I was a shy bird.I grew up with other birds,around me were tall trees,high mountains,beautiful flowers and waterfalls pouring down off the hills.I've learned how to communicate with mountains,waterfalls,and the birds that were singing in the sky.The passionate emotion I had about them had become one of the most significant feelings of my childhood.
I desire knowledge eagerly.I love books,especially those touching stories.I also desire an enduring friendship,eventhough I know it's quite difficult to change the fact that I'm a shy bird.I don't even know how to deal with a friendship,I can't express exactly what's in my mind.I've been trying hard to change my foibles.I learned to help others,so that I could talk with them frankly,I'm afraid of being misunderstood.I guess that's why I'm who I am.
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我是一个小鸟儿。到底说，我是一只鸟，一个梦想的飞行鸵鸟以来的童年。我要飞在山上，所以令人激动的和免费的。
和我是一个害羞鸟出生在一个偏远的山区宁静和平，所以我总是那么孤独我的童年。我长大的鸟，高大的树木，高山，野生花卉，并在山中的瀑布。这是一个自然的生活。我已经学会了如何感受瀑布，高山，鸟的歌...强烈的感情对他们。他们是我的重要组成部分，我童年的感觉。
但是，我渴望知识了。我喜...

15 分也叫高分？？？
很难改，不如再写一篇吧

第一段
你可以说 Iam a bird, a small bird exactly. An ostrich whom dreaming of fly since childhood. 后面一句可以省略也可以不省 看自己。
第二段
A shy bird Iam, a peaceful mountain i was born,and a lonely childhood...