小学生自我介绍,请看看有没有错误

小学生自我介绍,请看看有没有错误
Hello everyone,my name is Jenny,this year is 11 years old ,I most like the course is English,I think it is very interesting.I like reading,drawing and swimming.My home is in Jiangsu,which is a green city,my family has five people,my grandpa,my grandma,my father,my mother and I,I love them.I love little animal,my home has a clever rabbit and a beautiful parrot,after school I often play with them,they brought me a lot of fun.Do you love me?
a beautiful parrot,是想说“一对漂亮的鹦鹉”的,