谁能帮我检查写我的作文?Will drinking Coca-Cola or eating hamburgers mak

谁能帮我检查写我的作文?
Will drinking Coca-Cola or eating hamburgers
make Chinese think like American?
Do you believe the fairy tale that an ordinary girl becomes a princess when she wears a pair of crystal shoes?Answer to this question is the answer to the topic.My answer is negative.Supposing the answer is positive,what will happen?Drinking Coca-Cola yesterday,you would think like an American.Eating sushi today,you would think like a Japanese.While eating dumpling tomorrow,you would think like a Chinese.Where are you really from?You will puzzle yourself.To my opinion,frequently drinking a kind of beverage,eating a kind of food or wearing a kind of clothes mean that you are contacting and enjoying the certain kind of culture in some degree.But this culture will not as principle as the culture you were born with for ever.Religion,values,customs,and some other traditions are the sign of the culture.Anybody who was born in a society would be affected by the certain culture on his activities and thinking from cradle to grave.So thinking will influence the people’s eating,wearing,living habits.But these habits do not determine your thinking.