高中英语改错,我只能找到七处,呜呜.
高中英语改错,我只能找到七处,呜呜.
It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12.In the early morning,my parents and I went to the zoo at our car.There were a lot of visitors stood in the front of the box-coffice window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park,I was too eager to see the fiercely frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunately,I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him,but I had no luck.Wandering in the park,I felt alone without any compaions.Worse ill,I had no money,so I had to walk home,covered as much as 5 kilometers.
It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12.In the early morning,my parents and I went to the zoo at our car.There were a lot of visitors stood in the front of the box-coffice window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park,I was too eager to see the fiercely frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunately,I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him,but I had no luck.Wandering in the park,I felt alone without any compaions.Worse ill,I had no money,so I had to walk home,covered as much as 5 kilometers.
赞 月儿幽幽 幼苗
共回答了12个问题采纳率：100% 举报
It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival （加had）spent with my parents when I was 12. In（on） the early morning, my parents and I went to the zoo at（by） our car. There were a lot of visitors stood in the（去掉the） front of the（a） box-coffice window. We waited a long time and buy（bought） three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too（so） eager to see the fiercely frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him（them）, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone（lonely） without any compaions. Worse ill, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered（covering） as much as 5 kilometers
括号里就是改过的
满意望采纳,O(∩_∩)O谢谢
括号里就是改过的
满意望采纳,O(∩_∩)O谢谢
1年前
3
可能相似的问题
-
1年前3个回答
-
1年前1个回答
你能帮帮他们吗