这句英语是不是病句?Unfortunately, the performance of your very friend

your performance is very friendly, but unfortunately, I only can see your hypocrisy.
你的表现很友好,但不幸的是,我只能看到你的虚伪.
这样说是不是更好一点.
你这个句子算是有点小的语法错误,your本身就是“你的”,是第二人称物主代词,直接在后面加名词就行了,不需要用of格,并且你还丢掉了Be动词.如果你这个句子非要用of的话,就应该是the performance of yours is……只有名词性物主代词,yours, his, hers, mine才可以用在of 后面

Unfortunately, the performance of your were very friendly but I only see (your) hypocrisy .

your performance is very friendly, but unfortunately, I only can see your hypocrisy.
你的表现很友好，但不幸的是，我只能看到你的虚伪。
或者将原句中的your换成yours，后面加is