英语作文批改Hello ,everyone.today I want to tell you something abo

Hello ,everyone.Today I want to tell you something about my favorite singer.She comes from Canada.She is a rock star and she is a special girl with speical voice.I like her song"My Happy Ending" most.She once said :It’s okay to be different and it’s important to believe in yourself.I will do as she said and start to believe in myself.I will love her forever.Who is she?She is Avril Lavigne!
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Hello , everyone.Today I want to tell you something about my favourite singer.She comes from Canada.She is a rock star.She is a special girl and she has speical voice.I like her song"My H...

I will do what she said
myself
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