英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,didn't call me tonight.i am s

英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,didn't call me tonight.i am so glad.i have been afraid that h will call me,and i don't know how to face h.last night i made a right decision.from this case,i know that every time we face a problem ,we should never bury your head in sand.we should face it bravely,because,in any case,you have to solve the problem,if you can hide yourself today,maybe you have to face it tomorrow,and you will feel depressed the whole day.so why don't solve it right now.
jinjing819 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

l__nd1_333oc1e8c 幼苗

共回答了22个问题采纳率:81.8% 举报

h(He) didn't call me tonight.i am(was,因为你这里是在知道他没打电话之前的感受,所以用was) so glad.i have been(不用have been,就用was行了) afraid that h(he) will call me,and i don't(同理,didn't) know how to face h(him).last night i made a right decision.from this case,i know(knew) that every time we face a problem ,we should never bury your head in sand.we should face it bravely,because,in any case,you have to solve the problem,if you can(can可以不用,这样更通畅) hide yourself today,maybe you have to face it tomorrow,and you will feel depressed the whole day.so why don't(加上一个you) solve it right now.
主要就是时态有点小问题
第二个建议he和him不要缩写成h,要不然会弄错
主题明确,很好

1年前

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youbelong 幼苗

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h?? he? 我就假设是he,不喜欢你可以再改成h
i'm so glad that he didn't call me tonight. I was so afraid that he would call me, because i didn't know how to face him. Last night, i made the right decision. From now...

1年前

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群策智领 幼苗

共回答了2183个问题 举报

have been - had been
will - would
don't - didn't
last night i made a right decision.from this case ????
your head - our heads
sand - the sand
hide yourself - avoid it
why don't - why not

1年前

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居雅 幼苗

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I am so glad he didn't call me tonight. I was afraid that he might call me, and I wouldn't know how to face him. Yesterday I did the right ting. From this case I know that we should never bury our hea...

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