谁能帮我看一下这个句子哪里语法不规范吗?顺便帮改下

谁能帮我看一下这个句子哪里语法不规范吗?顺便帮改下
What's more terrible is that the patients who give themselves treatment by using the computers instead of seeing a doctor sometimes might be misdiagnosed and their illness will be more serious,which will lead to the serious consequence.
katherinechan 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

shenchen_ljd 幼苗

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What is worse,the patients,who seek for treatment by using computers instead of by seeing a doctor,sometime may be misdiagnosed ,which will lead their illness to be more serious.

1年前

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xianla198501 幼苗

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我的英语还行,依我看没有问题........

1年前

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gooood 幼苗

共回答了235个问题 举报

恩,语法没问题。在适当的 地方再断一下句,看起来就更明了了

1年前

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4691 幼苗

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很规范

1年前

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