短文改错In my hometown there used to have a temple with a histor
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In my hometown there used to have a temple with a
history of more than four hundred years.It lies in a
valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful
and famous so many tourists came to visit it every day.
They took photo;they wrote down their names on the
walls;they brought food and drink and left the rubbish
eveywhere.One day some tourists made fire to cook
food near the temple.All of a sudden,a strong wind
blew.The wooden temple caught fire.Soon the all
temple was burned down and only a little walls remained.
The beautiful temple disappeared.
In my hometown there used to have a temple with a
history of more than four hundred years.It lies in a
valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful
and famous so many tourists came to visit it every day.
They took photo;they wrote down their names on the
walls;they brought food and drink and left the rubbish
eveywhere.One day some tourists made fire to cook
food near the temple.All of a sudden,a strong wind
blew.The wooden temple caught fire.Soon the all
temple was burned down and only a little walls remained.
The beautiful temple disappeared.
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In my hometown there used to (be) a temple with a
history of more than four hundred years.It (lay) in a
valley with green hills around it.It was (so) beautiful
and famous (that) many tourists came to visit it every day.
They took (photos);they wrote down their names on the
walls;they brought food and (drank) and left the rubbish
eveywhere.One day some tourists made(a) fire to cook
food near the temple.All of a sudden,a strong wind
blew.The wooden temple caught fire.Soon the (whole)
temple was burned down and only a little (wall) remained.
The beautiful temple disappeared.绝对正确！
In my hometown there used to (be) a temple with a
history of more than four hundred years.It (lay) in a
valley with green hills around it.It was (so) beautiful
and famous (that) many tourists came to visit it every day.
They took (photos);they wrote down their names on the
walls;they brought food and (drank) and left the rubbish
eveywhere.One day some tourists made(a) fire to cook
food near the temple.All of a sudden,a strong wind
blew.The wooden temple caught fire.Soon the (whole)
temple was burned down and only a little (wall) remained.
The beautiful temple disappeared.绝对正确！
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