英语翻译.Because of the bad Spaciousness |in the corridor passag

英语翻译
.Because of the bad Spaciousness |in the corridor passageway,I hope that there could put some bonsai pot that can make our environment look more beautiful .we could take the way of rent that not need maintenance work.
I hope that there can replace a more bigger Fire Extinguisher in the corridor passageway that can be more safe and Standard.
If there are more foreigners and they need Car service ,travel Service.we can bring in Enterprise RentACar and cooperate with tourism company,like the the National Chain Shenzhou RentingaCar in this locality.
These are my service and I wish to Adopt.My English is not very good.Baidu,my friend and colleague help me translate it.please excuse me if there is something not clear on my expression
为什么我越读 越觉得不通顺呢?当然我英语很差的啦¥#%!#
钱聚槐 1年前 已收到1个回答 举报

水舞耀扬 幼苗

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1.corridor 和 passageway 都有走廊、过道之意,语义累赘.
2、一句话中that 太多了,可以使用which来引导定语从句
3、some bonsai pot 又盆景又盆子,意思重复,花盆直接用flowerpot/
4、not need 动词的否定应该是 do not + 动词原形 要不就needn't do sth.
能力有限,只能帮你纠正这么多了.还要翻译?这样语法不通翻译出来也会很别扭的.

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你写的英文是什么意思?? 是你写的?? 还是说我要这样来表达???

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是我帮你按照原文改的 我觉得这样通顺 下面是我写的翻译 和你的文章相同
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