段落编写(英语）50字 不少于5句 name number birthday have favorite

My name is Lihua. 8 is my favorite number.
Because it was my 8th birthday yesterday.
Last night many friends came.
My parents gave me a big cake as a present.
I blew off the candles and made a wish.
We had a very good time in my birthday party.
We sang and danced ,and played happily.
What a wonderful day it was!
单词全用到了,而且超过50字.

My name is Tom，I am fifteen years.I study in number 3 Middle School.Next Sunday is my birthday.We will have a birthday party in the restaurant.We will eat a lot of food.And We will invite my friends and teachers.We plan to eat cakes.Cakes are delicious and they are my favourite food.

Some years ago, I was not in good health. I had to go to see doctors.
A doctor said that I could build up my body by swimming. So I often go swimming and I am in good health now.
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