求挑毛病.This is a little difficult for us to understand,please

修改如下：
It is a little difficult for us to understand,please listen carefully:
I'd like to introduce students a computer game,which is called "minecraft".The game is appropriate to play,as it won't affect our study and it can enhance our understanding ability at the same time.
"minecraft" is made of blocks,you are born at random place.You have no task in the game.What you need to do is just try your best to survive.Besides,in this game,you can go fishing,mining,logging,hunting,and so on.
However,people always build their own houses at first,because there are many monsters at night.

• This is a little difficult for you to understand, please listen carefully:
  I'd like to introduce students to a computer game, which is called "minecraft" ， if appropriately play it, it will not affect our study and may enhance our understanding ability.
  "minecraft" is made of blocks, you bron at random place, the game has no task , as long as you try your best to survive, in this game, you can go fishing, mining, logging, hunting etc..
  But people always love to build their own house at first, because there are monsters at night.

• 希望采纳

This is a little difficult for us to understand, please listen carefully→This is a little difficult for us to understand, so please listen carefully(一句句子两个谓语是不可以的，要用连词连接)
I'd like to introduce stu...

This is a little difficult for us to understand, please listen carefully:
I'd like to introduce a computer game to studentsThe game is called "minecraft",and it is appropriate to play .Playing th...

第一句就有问题，应该用“It's" 而不是”This is"； 第二句应该是”I‘d like to introduce a computer game to you'， .......... 后面错误太多了

1. I'd like to introduce students to a computer game：to去掉

2. if appropriate to play it：if play it appropriatly

3. the game has no task of what:这句我木有看懂诶！

写的不错！O(∩_∩)O

introduce a computer game to you.