帮我看看我的文章有没有错误好吗 谢谢拉
帮我看看我的文章有没有错误好吗 谢谢拉
14th September
Dear Staff,
I’d like to inform you that we are introducing a new training course on presentation in order to enhance our staffs’ capability in some occasions. The course is scheduled at 2:00 p.m. every Friday starting from next week. You can apply for it through our company’s online operational system.
Yours sincerely,
Greg Cai
14th September
Dear Staff,
I’d like to inform you that we are introducing a new training course on presentation in order to enhance our staffs’ capability in some occasions. The course is scheduled at 2:00 p.m. every Friday starting from next week. You can apply for it through our company’s online operational system.
Yours sincerely,
Greg Cai
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这篇短文总体上没多大问题,细节上我找到了以下问题：
1 第一句里的宾语从句应该用一般将来时比较好；
2 occasion与in搭配不当,把in换成on或是把occasions换成cases
你觉得呢?
1 第一句里的宾语从句应该用一般将来时比较好；
2 occasion与in搭配不当,把in换成on或是把occasions换成cases
你觉得呢?
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