求哪位高手帮忙修改一下论文语法错误和病句,大后天就答辩了,我语法水平不行,

Chinese attach great importance to "eating",and "hunger breeds discontentment"this proverb proves that we think that eating is as important as God.Because our nation have been in the low level of productivity for thousands of years,people seldom have enough food to eat,we pay more attention to eating.I think it is probably out of a survival needs.If a culture treats the eating as the most important thing,then there will be two phenomena:on the one hand,they will put the food function to acme,not only to survive,but also use it to maintain health.this is the culture foundation of that "medicine is not liked to eat’’;on the other hand,the excessive attention to eating can make people praise the pursuit of the delicious .Cookery in China is to the almost ultimate pursuit of the delicious,so even the Chinese people living overseas,also live by running restaurants,which has become the fundamental foundation of us in the world!Unfortunately,when we put the pursuit of the delicious as the first requirement,we ignore the most basic food nutritional value,much of our traditional food to go through hot fried and long time slow fire cooking,so that it means destruction of the nutritional contents of food ,and many nutrients are lost during the processing.As a result ,when we talk about nutritional problem,we mean in fact touching the biggest weakness of the Chinese diet culture.A folk saying goes:"hunger breeds discontentment,food to taste first"[4] “民以食为天,食以味为先”
简单地 改动了一下.供参考.

第一个eat 我觉得可以改成eating吧。