大家好 请帮忙点评一下 BEC 中级的作文谢谢了, part one !

大家好 请帮忙点评一下 BEC 中级的作文谢谢了, part one !
To: All staff
from: derek
Subject: computer system
I have just been informed the computer system will be down on next wednesday 1
o'clock Pm ,it will be down for at least 3 hours, so please make sure that all works are done before 1 pm, hope the computers will run faster than they used to be.
Thanks
含笑-东 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

cxchm 幼苗

共回答了19个问题采纳率:89.5% 举报

格式正确,要点全面,建议您做一下完善:
1、inform引导的宾从添加引导词that
2、on next Wednesday和1 o'clock Pm之间添加at,即at 1pm
3、习惯表达:Wednesday首字母W大写;下午一点整直接1:00p.m.即可
4、句间关系有点混乱需要划分标点,句子中首字母大写
5、It will be与for时态矛盾,建议调整统一为一种时态.
6、make sure一句中时态改为将来完成比较符合.仅供参考,

1年前 追问

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含笑-东 举报

make sure 怎么改成将来完成时啊

whwh1977 幼苗

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please make sure that all the work will have been done before 1pm

1年前

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caijianghuai 幼苗

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To: All staff
from: derek
Subject: computer system maintainance
The reason why I write this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down,...

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