高手帮我看一下托福作文第一次写,求高手提提意见.It has been said,"Not everything tha
高手帮我看一下托福作文
第一次写,求高手提提意见.
It has been said,"Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.In your opinion,which source is more important?Why?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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After acquired the skill of reading and writing,one get the access to knowledge from books as well as from experience.Generally,those skills considered as basic come from experience,like:walking,speaking,driving,etc .And books offer knowledge at a higher level,such as math and literature.Never can one say either of the both sources is not necessary,actually,each side holds advantages of its own.
Book,which is called “teacher and friend of people”,has been instructing human beings for thousands of years,and there is no signal indicates this will stop in the conceivable future.An outstanding factor of book is,the knowledge contained in it,tends to be precise and objective.Usually,no mistake can ever be found in books.This is because,what is written in books is the combination of different experience,among which the responsible writer delete the faults and maintain the truth.Thus,you have little chance to go totally wrong under the insruction of books.Moreover,since books provide system knowledge,it is possible for one to become expert in a new domain with books.For instance,there’re books teach you to become an excellent cook,an outstanding manager,or a famous actress.
In comparing with books,experience also has its own preponderance.Knowledge from experience updates much more frequent than those in books.With today’s fast tempo of life,some knowledge on paper soon convert into old-fashioned.Since people contact with the society around them everyday,however,knowledge from experience never meet such problem,the new knowledge soon replace the old one.
Despite the weakness books may have,as a student majored in Physics,I would say that it is more important a source of knoeledge than experience,for the reason that it is sophiscated and with precision.And that’s what I need in my future work.
首先感谢bangbang-nova详尽的解答。还有一点小问题,首先你说的第二条,我并不是要用从句,那个this是指代上文的;还有就是specific details的问题,在不用例子的情况下,到底如何才算做到了这点?