外语这句话有错吗?如何修改?In modern society full of keen competition and

外语这句话有错吗?如何修改?
In modern society full of keen competition and challenges,people should cherish time to improve themselves such as by furthering their studies to gain more knowledge and skills,children are of course no exception.
cifang 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

百和译厂 幼苗

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好多错误啊..
一个一个来哦~
In modern society full of keen .
society后面要加it is
competition可以加s的
such as可以不用因为by已经有那个意义 并且后面列举的方面不需要动用such as
最后:children are of course no exception.
要改成in no exception
请楼主过目^_^

1年前

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ruohaiqingya 幼苗

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这篇chinglish已经不能改了,废了

1年前

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飘霓儿 幼苗

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呵呵,多多加强语法咯``

1年前

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angel150464313 幼苗

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修改后的
The modern society is full of violent competition and challenges; people should seize time to improve themselves, for example, by furthering their studies to gain more knowledge and skills. Children are of course no exception.

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