帮忙看下语法和词汇使用哪里有错There is a familiarity between Chinese classi

There is a 【familiarity——similarity】 between Chinese classical poetry and western poetry.They 【are 去掉】both 【used——use 】【the 多余】 words to express【 the多余 】human being‘s 【spirits精力；酒精——spirit 精神/心灵】.Whichever you read,you will be affected by the feelings of ecstasy,【 sad——sadness】,sorrow and so on.The feelings are 【the 多余】common 【point多余 】【of——in 】human beings.That’s why 【the多余 】poetry can【 struck过去式——strike】 a responsive chord in the hearts of its readers 【after——in 】such 【a 加词】long time.
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familiarity 改为 similarity 相似之处
are the common point 改为 have a common ground 共同点
struck 改为 strike 引起反响 struck 是 strike 的过去式
after 改为 during

such 后面加 a/an 其余的还好吧

心仪物语的回答是不错的，但还是有一些小错误。可以考虑以下。修改的地方用了大写字母：
There is SIMILARITY between Chinese classical poetry and western poetry. They BOTH USE words to express human FEELINGS. EITHER ONE you read, you will be a...