listen to music is good for you ,singing alone won't hurt

1.listen to music is good for you ,singing alone won't hurt 这句话是病句.listen to music是动词,不能做主语.但是大概的意思可以是：听音乐对你有好处,唱一唱也不错.
2.there is no point that .:没有这种结构.正确的是there is no point doing sth.意思是,做什么事没有意义.如：There is no point in using force.
3.remain below freezing:（温度）保持在0度以下.
4.she become(s) a lawyer as her father had before her.这句话的意思是,她像她爸爸一样当了律师.before her这里的before是在她之前,意思就是说,她爸爸在她之前也是律师.
5.the village lies between three hills；the village lies among hills 若这句也用between 行么?英语的语法说between是在两者之间,among是在多个之中,但是使用起来并没有严格的区分.你是可以说the villlage lies between hills的.
6.you can see it with your own eyes ,改为 you can see it for yourself 行么都是亲自的意思.可以的.
7.for a whole month ,there is no rain 语法书上写的,但我怎么记得试卷上是for a whole month ,there have been no rain ,前面只表示现在啊.都可以.前者使用一般现在时,因为is这个动词是可以延续的.For a whole month,there has been no rain,这句话讲强调的是一直以来都没有雨.口语中可以使用前者,但是写作中应该使用后者.