帮我看一下有没有语病Suddenly,I had an idea.I told it to my father.It w

帮我看一下有没有语病
Suddenly,I had an idea.I told it to my father.It was my father not making my mother angry next week.
这个主意就是一周内我爸爸都不让我妈妈生气
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迷茫小哥 幼苗

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后半句改为:It was that my father would not make my mother angry next week.

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gerione 幼苗

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told前加 had过去完成时, it was 后加that 同谓语从句

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小胖妹58 幼苗

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楼上的would 改成 should 会好一点。还有,前面单句用太多,读起来不通顺,改为,Suddenly,I had an idea,which I told it to my father was....(后面就按楼上改的。)

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