差不多高一水平的英语作文.内容是以一封信的格式写给你住院的朋友.可以写你很关心他啦~要他注意保护自己的身体啊~多吃点有益

Dear...
i am so sorry to hear that you are in hospital,all the classmates
are miss you so much.we feel like upset without you.teacher began to teach new chapter yesterday,many mates can not understand clearly,i'm worry about you,cause it must difficult to you to catch the point when you back school,so i ask teacher to explain all the new point to me,so i can help you with your study.
besides,i also care about your health,do you feel better right now?i search on internet,friuts,milk,water and vegatables are very helpful to your health.take care yourself and don't think too much.
one more thing i need to tell you is,i'm going to see you this weekend,i'm planning to bring you some books and your favorite PSP.
if you want me to bring you anything,just call me!i'll be waiting.
see you then.
Your truely,
XXXXX
这个绝对像高中学生的,楼上有点过了吧...很容易被看出来.

Dear [**]:
I am extremely sorry to hear that your illness, which we had thought was clearing up, has become more serious, and that your have had to go into hospital. Let us hope that it will be fo...

楼上两个太牛了，语法都是错误的！
一楼的太中式英文了，搭配也不正确 ，有点像机译，字词太死板（虽然运用了几个大学的单词，但也用不对）然后稍微修改了一下，没有什么基础。
2楼的虽然比较简单，但是太多很简单的语法都错误。很明显。
楼主你不要选择他们了
3楼的坏坏的鱼答的很好。是大学水准了。没有语法错误。不过如果你是高中生，用这个去交作业，老师一定怀疑。...