选择其中一段,并修改英文文章题目是: My Most Embarrassing Moment1One day,I wen
选择其中一段,并修改英文
文章题目是: My Most Embarrassing Moment
1One day,I went to my cousin's house and saw her five-year-old son,and I asked her son whether he wanted to go shopping with me on Saturday afternoon.He agreed and said: "Well.Of course,aunty.I'd like to go shooping with you.″ What? Am I so old as to be called ″aunty″? I was more embarrassed than angry.
2Attracted by the plots in the book, I forgot the time. Involuntarily, a clerk had come to me.“Sir, would you like to buy this book? Please pay for it and read it at your home. Don’t read it here for a long time please.” said she.“Ok.How much is it?” I asked the clerk.“Two hundred and eighty yuan.” answered she."So expensive?“,"Yeah, it is the recent best seller.” said she.I am sure that it is the recent best seller,but I never thought its price was so high.In fact, there wasn’t enough money with me that time, so I felt embarrassed and ashamed.Finally I left the bookstore quickly.
3When I was about 12 years old,there was a public class,and teacher asked every student to wear school uniform for that class.But I found that I couldn't my uniform,then my mother told me she had sent my uniform to others.When teacher saw me didn't wear uniform for the public class,she asked me what happened,I told her the truth.At last,teacher asked me to wear a boy's uniform,then I followed the teacher's advice.That made me feel embarrassed.
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