共10处错误,请找出来并改正.This afternoon when Iwas walking in the stree

This afternoon when I was walking in the street,I saw （a）group of young men playing towards them has a stick in his hand（不是hands）.He touched one of the youny men（不是man） on the foot.The youny man stood
up and shouted at him with anger(去掉复数 ).Just then a girl came up.She（不是he） took the blind man by the arm and led him across（不是cross） the street.All the other youny men got up too and（不是but,此处无转折的意思） looked at the girl in surprise .Their faces（加复数） turned（不是turn） red.I stood there feeling（不是feel） uncomfortable
找完了 呵呵 比较明显的就是这些 十个；p

你这段话错得很离谱。。。你确定你没有打错题目么？

group-a group
has-had
in his hands-in his hand
angers-anger
He-She
cross-across
youny men-young men
but-and
face-faces
feel-feeling

When I was walking in the street this afternoon, I saw a group of young boys playing a trick with an old blind man.
Because the blind man, who was holding a stick in his hands, touched one of tho...